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better than cbat, i think (PXTUNES #25)

placed 2nd/5 (28.259)
i would recommend having it at slightly <100% volume because audio starts clipping

honestly came out better than i thought it would! maybe the fact that there's only 4 voices makes it easier to make sound ok
the end is unfortunately rushed because i had like 5 minutes to finish at that point. that tenor voice in the last two m. is pretty lame compared to itself anywhere else
the beginning certainly reveals that i started this piece with something slightly different in mind. that's absolutely the lick, and i was hoping to incorporate it more, but unfortunately that didn't happen
mistake that i don't think i can hear: portamento on alto on m. 17 ends too low, but it's really subtle and what can i do about it now
mistake that is very noticeable: open hat on m. 10 is held, not new
i'm happy with everything else, especially m. 10-21 (big chunk of the thing, i know, but that's what, 10 seconds?)

Oct. 9, 2022, 11:45 p.m.
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Oct. 10, 2022, 4:05 a.m.

such lovely writing