This is my first composition.
I didn't learn anything about composition, and I just drew arts, but I wanted to write songs as a hobby, so I used PxTone.
Feedback on composition is highly welcome. It doesn't matter whether it's the tone or the effect.
[as for feedback / suggestions on where to go, it really depends on your own goals! if you have a particular song / style you like or want to mimick, then it's easier to talk about it :)]
oh heck yeah this is a groove! love how the drums get more intense after measure 4. the melody at 20 is catchy too!